It was time, Dane runble came out, Everyone started screaming! They was really loud it almost broke my eardrums.
The music started blaring out, He started singing but he was really quiet.
Barely anyone could hear him over his blaring music, I started moving back but every step i took i stood on a drink bottle,they covered the floor like sand on a beach.
The ground started shaking it was that loud, All of a sudden the smell of perfume filled my nose, uh oh it was my sister!
a few moments later people started pushing through.
aww dane rumble finished.
March 17th, 2011 at 6:00 pm
(good) You have really descriptive writing and you have no mistacks in your writing.
(need to improve on)You need make it little bit longer so we what through the conert.
April 21st, 2011 at 4:24 am
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September 18th, 2011 at 8:21 pm
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September 25th, 2011 at 4:52 am
@Duncan, I agree with him there is no mistake in your writing..Just be aware of the spelling..Most important the details…
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